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A2 Critique!
Friday, September 20, 2013
Just had tutorial tonight, and we had small group critiques. Really tired so I'll just summarise and not elaborate. So the few problems that i had to address in my draft:♠ Looks too global, cannot tell it's Singapore
♠ Need to be more obvious
♠ Put more examples where Singaporeans blame the government's incapability despite the situation being out of the government's control
♠ Basically delete bottom part, top part is okay
And a list of roughly what I plan to do:
♠ find maybe 3-4 different such scenarios (flooding, haze, ???, ???)
♠ divide bottom into 3 rows --> situation, what govt has done, complaints
♠ leave the top as it is, with background showing the origin of the situations
Yup that's about it I think! ahh recess week soon! hope i have enough time to make my assignment 2 look decent before submission >.<
about me
Artist.
Yan Ling. 19.
29 June.
Singapore.
NUS SoC.